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Breathing Life [Open] « Thread Started on Sept 8, 2009, 11:09pm »
The petite white kit prowled about the clearing, vivid blue eyes narrowed in mischief. Tail fluffing up with eagerness, Whitekit looked eagerly about the clearing for her partner in crime, and brother, Onyxkit.
Where's that black tom when you need him? Whitekit though stubbornly, sticking to the edges of camp, as she didn't want to get herded into the nursery once again, by her father, Stolenwind, or a warrior.
Thistlestar's gaze wondered about the clearing, crawling with simple clan life. The calico she cat gave a light purr, content in the Windclan camp. Life had been calm and quiet lately, the borders calm and unscathed, the territory unthreatened, and the camp bright with the joys of Windclan.
Yawning, the she cat rose to her paws. "Anyone up for a patrol?" Thistlestar asked softly, eager to stretch her legs and feel the grass beneath her paws.
Re: Breathing Life [Open] « Reply #2 on Sept 12, 2009, 12:27pm »
>>The tiny black kit watched the golden grasses of Windclan territory wave in the soft breeze. He sighed softly and rested his head on his paws. I wonder what Stolenwind and Whitekit are doing..? He thought softly to himself. He blinked as he saw something in the grass and sat up slowly, not making alot of movements. W-What's that?! He exclaimed in his head, inner voice scared. Poor Onyxkit was mute, not able to make a single meow. It bothered him every day of his young life. The grass parted and he tensed, ready to run. But nothing was there....or was it? He felt a burst of curiousity and took a few tentative steps forward. I felt the breeze quicken and a scent....familiar, like home, hit his nose. Curious, the pitch black kit padded into the parted grass and looked around. What WAS that?! He thought with curiosity. He sat down and sighed softly. Maybe he though, he was just losing his mind. OH wonderful. He sighed in his head. A few moments passed as Onyxkit listened to the waving of the grasses, and was ready to leave when something happened. The grass blurred in front of him and the air shimmered like the surface of water. Slowly the form of a cat came to him. His dark blue eyes widened emensely and he fell back in surprise. He heard a soft chuckle and got up. W-Who are you?! He thought, but then remembered that he was mute and felt angry again. The cat smiled softly and opened her eyes, revealing a beautiful sky blue color. Onyxkit felt something tug at him.... Mother? He asked in his head softly. The she cat got up and walked towards him slowly, touching noses with him. "Hello Onyxkit" Her voice called, soft and gentle as the breeze. He felt a soft smile on his face. You can hear me? The Starclan she cat nodded slowly. [b]"Yes, I can my kit.[/i] He felt a surge of confusion. But...why are you here..talking to me? The she cat purred lightly. "I know you've been hurting Onyxkit, but I want to tell you that what happened wasn't your fault...do not blame yourself" Onyxkit smiled and the his mother wrapped her tail around him. "Go out, have fun..your just a kit. But..." Her voice trailed off and I looked up at her. Her face was sad now, staring at nothing. What? I asked. "Stolenwind is so broken now...." I felt sadness creep in again. Dad WAS very different...I knew it, even though I hadn't seen what he had been like before. He was a good dad, but he was....always sad. What can I do, I'm just a kit She looked down and smiled softly. "Show him he has something to live for" She stepped away from me and waved her tail. "Now go, my kit." She smiled weakly but her blue eyes shone sadly. I nodded and purred before running out. I need to find Whitekit!! I bolted into camp and looked around, ignoring angry meows. I noticed her and ran over. Whitekit Whitekit!! I thought, tackling her. I stood up, blue eyes wild.
Notes: very very bad...I usually post 800-1200 words. >__< oh well, good to be back!! Muse: dead Listening To: n/a Word Count: 611
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Re: Breathing Life [Open] « Reply #3 on Sept 12, 2009, 6:07pm »
|| ooc; | Dun worry Jade. =D I like to posts long posts like that too, I've just been lazy. ^^
Calico ears slid forward, erect, at the voice of a fellow Windclan warrior. A topaz gaze wondered the short distance between the pair before finally coming in contact with Firebreeze.
Letting a warm smile paint her muzzle, Thistlestar straightened up, cheering up at the thought of having company. "Greetings Firebreeze." The she cat purred, dipping her head to the warrior. "Great, I'd love to have your company." The cheerful leader meowed softly.
Vivid blue eyes narrowed in the twitching flutters of wings. Whitekit's stalk had been distracted as a magnificent butterfly wondered across the white kit's path. Landing within the springy grass a short few tail lengths ahead. It's vivid, colorful wings twitching, threatening to take flight at any given heart beat.
Still in a crouch, the white she cat craned herself low in the grass, tail flicking ever so slightly. Blue eyes flashed in determination as Whitekit crept forward. Her paws itching, the white she cat couldn't hold back anymore. With a light growl, Whitekit sprung forward.
The butterfly trapped under petite white paws, Whitekit purred triumphantly. "Got ya." She mused, curiosity pulling at her tail.
Sinkng to her stomach, Whitekit slowly opened her paws and out fluttered the insect. Muscles tensing, Whitekit prepared to spring after it, until she was tackled by a black haze. Onyxkit. Whitekit thought with growing excitement, scrabbling away as she spun around, crouching with a playful grin to leap at her brother.
However his wild blue eyes made Whitekit pause. "Something's up?" She asked softly.
Blue orbs flickered about the clearing, resting on the two kits, his kits. His gaze was protective, and that was just about it. Hollow, guarded, pained. Stolenwind, father to the young Onyxkit and Whitekit, mate of the lovely Ripplewind.
The tom had grown rather thin, thinner than the average Windclan warrior. His muscles lean, though his ribs clear through a dusty gray pelt. Stolenwind's protective graze never left the two black and white furballs, really, they were all he had left.
Windclan life around him seemed nothing but a hazy memory, his kits were everything now. Despite the fact the silent warrior tried his best not to let his pains show, especially to his young kits, it was still evident. Ripplewind had died shortly after birth, Stolenwind never got over it. Part of him wanted to join Starclan ever pulse his heart beated, though the other part felt a fierce duty to be sure his kits would always be safe.
Whitekit and Onyxkit reminded him so much of Ripplewind. Stolenwind was constantly dwelling on the past, as much as it hurt him. The warrior had been near silent all his life, there were only three cats in the entire forest he'd talk to openly. Poor Onyxkit was a mute, where as Stolenwind could talk at will, though chose not to. The father did his best to relate.
With a long, hollow breath, Stolenwind rested his head on his paws, watching the kits fumble about.
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Re: Breathing Life [Open] « Reply #4 on Dec 11, 2009, 8:40pm »
Firebreeze moved slowly thinking that she needed some social time sometimes being the shy one is lonely.Sunpaw looked over at Flowerkit and looked like he saw a ghoul.
Flowerkit walked over to Sunpaw hoping not to get in trouble with mom."What right now is your problem" she whispered?
"Look at mom" said Sunpaw.
"Sometimes I think I'm the oldest one" said Flowerkit walking away.
Firebreeze was starring off into space when she thought she had heard Thistlestar say something."Oh I'm sorry but did you say something to me".Sorry i wasn't paying attention" she said truely sorry.
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